speech writing.

yesterday i did a speech it was so screy. but i did it i did it about my broken elbow i was so glad when i finished .saying  it i filet  so happy that finished .also we had to be in a group of two or three we went throw everyone excpet the people that were away. the end bye bye

 Pixar’s Storytelling Structure

 Pixar’s Storytelling Structure

 

Start your story:
Once upon a time there was: 
Once upon a time there was a parent. She had 3  children. Their names were Bob, jack, poppy and max. She was a mother. Every morning,  they woke up, got dressed and tidied up the rubbish.

 

Everyday:
When their Dad came home, he said “What have you been doing you guys? The house is a mess. Tidy this up now. I mean now” “Dad, why are you so mad?” said Max .

”Because I paid for this house, now clean up the house now!”

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One day:
Later Bob Poppy and their mother Lily finally got  a job and also the kids get to go to their first school but at the end they got told of because they were running inside 

 

Because of that: Because of that:
their mum was late for work and that is why they were running inside so when they got inside the car lily started spending off and when they got to lily,s work popy said to lily what can we do while you are in working what can we do you can just  play in the car i will only be half an hour bob said that is agis can we do something else fine you can play outside yaay said poppy but be nice to each other okay then  Then when lily came back she saw that jack fitted poppy what did you do now poppy is hurt now i have to take her to the hospital now you are never doing this again get in to the car now okay the said jack  this time you are staying in the car this time bob said fine if i come back and i see you hurt other then you are going to get it okay then  

 

 

Until finally: 
They were all good and Poppy was fine and it was poppy’s birthday she got heaps of gifts and a cake happy birthday poppy

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